http://www.anorexiaadvisor.com/2008/12/19/please-comment-on-what-ive-written-so-far-this-is-supposed-to-be-a-short-story-is-it-worth-continuing/ Advice on Anorexia Sat, 11 Sep 2010 02:18:26 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 http://www.anorexiaadvisor.com/2008/12/19/please-comment-on-what-ive-written-so-far-this-is-supposed-to-be-a-short-story-is-it-worth-continuing/comment-page-1/#comment-761 designinggene Fri, 19 Dec 2008 06:28:59 +0000 http://www.anorexiaadvisor.com/2008/12/19/please-comment-on-what-ive-written-so-far-this-is-supposed-to-be-a-short-story-is-it-worth-continuing/#comment-761 Seems like you've got a story to tell. It might help to make the story come more alive by writing some of the material as scenes. I suggest you take a class in fiction--there are many online classes that aren't too expensive. Try Gotham Writers Workshops. Good luck.<br><b>References : </b><br> Seems like you've got a story to tell. It might help to make the story come more alive by writing some of the material as scenes. I suggest you take a class in fiction–there are many online classes that aren't too expensive. Try Gotham Writers Workshops. Good luck.
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